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I am a Biomedical Science graduate with a strong passion for healthcare and patient care. As a friendly professional with a background overseeing guest issues with tact and concern, I have honed my communication and customer service skills while representing the company brand effectively. Currently working as a Guest Services Associate, I promote courtesy and ensure a positive guest experience in a fast-paced environment. My attention to detail, dedication to safety and operational efficiency, and ability to work both independently and collaboratively make me confident that this position would be a perfect opportunity to deepen my involvement in patient care. I am eager to contribute to a healthcare team where I can apply my knowledge, support patient wellbeing, and make a meaningful difference.
Graduated with Honors BSc in Biomedical Science from York University, June 2024
Passionate about learning and advancing skills in medical equipment maintenance and patient care to contribute to the overall safety and efficiency of healthcare services
Passionate about patient care and dedicated to advancing skills in medical equipment maintenance, with a strong drive to pursue further medical studies